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Dirty Little Secret

Not dirty.
Not really...
Dark though.
Sad.
Painful.
Sisters.
Gone.
Heart.
Broken.
A piece of me
Was ripped away.
The little bit
That was attached.
Sweet,
Innocent,
Little girls.
Subjected to pain.
Torture.
Nightmares.
Gone.
Again.

Author notes

This one was hard for me to write, but I need a way to vent the pain I feel. My poems won't be great any time soon, so please forgive me.

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    October 30

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    Poetry is the best form of ranting and venting and a very good way to have therapy on some feelings...you penned your emotions well in this poem!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you have alot of fun on this site!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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  • animepunk
    October 30

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    very good

    this poem was very good. you can feel the pain. and don't put your poetry down. you have a different writing style. just because it's different doesn't mean it sucks. very good write

    • Breakaway
      October 31
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      Thanks!

      Thank you... the reason I said this poem isn't great is because I couldn't figure out a way to describe the way I feel. I'll probably write a different one, just with better words. Thank you for the comment though! I appreciate it!!