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Women against women

The most ferocious enemies they make.
Against each other, scalps they take.

No healing of wounds, no time for that.
Lines drawn in sand ,they have spat.

100 years war, perhaps even longer.
Female bitterness grows even stronger.

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  • Pearl-1
    October 31

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    omg Pete
    but ya so right here
    we need to put our claws away lol
    x x x


    • Pete Greenslade gold member
      October 31
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      awwww don't put your claws away june...you wouldnt have any more use for them....smile...thanks for enjoying my poems x

  • Excellent Peter and I have seen that competition is much more ferocious between women and they wear that 'smiling assassin' smile that you come to know!


    • Pete Greenslade gold member
      October 31
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      yes i see the smiling assassin look in the workplace gaylene,,,thanks for the parallel x

  • Bob Fox
    October 30

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    Pete

    Methinks you are going to get yourself in trouble for this one. lol But no doubt there is some truth in this write. seems competition is prevalent in many women. Another good one.


    • Pete Greenslade gold member
      October 31

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      i was in trouble with women since junior school bob, so i'm used to it...thanks so much


  • deep space
    October 30
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    wow watch your back now mate

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