All the gold and the guns
in the world
couldn't get you off.
I'm feeling rough,
I'm feeling raw,
in the prime of my life.
The crowds roll by
goodnight, it's the wrong time,
let's get paralyzed.
His needle sewed my eyes shut,
the world is crashing down.
I'm caught in excitement,
passed out in our school clothes
so we'd wake up in our
Sundays Best.
I'll turn off the tv
let's start it over
from
the
beginning.
Author notes
f a i l e d - d r e a m e r
Title song: The Blind Lead The Blind - Pan.a.ce.a
1. Gold Guns Girls - Metric
2. Time To Pretend -MGMT
3. Break The Same - MuteMath
4. Fast Blood - Frightened Rabbit
5. Funeral Parlour Tricks - Schoolyard Heroes
6. Like Sheep Among Wolves - Here I Come Falling
7. Sex Is Personal - The Faint
8. Slowdance On The Inside - Taking Back Sunday
9. Old, Old Fashioned - Frightened Rabbit
10. In A Red Dress And Alone - Evans Blue
This was fun! XD
A contest entry
- another ipod shuffle contest... by just weak hands.
650 points, ended November 17, 30 entries
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the background and font color is rather distracting ^_^; if you could possibly change it, I'd really appreciate it, sorry !
as for the poem, all I can say is wow ! You definitely got some songs that agree with you ahaha I really love it. It sounds as if you sat down and strung these words together yourself ! Great job !
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Thanks.
I changed the background as well.
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even though I'm like, two weeks late responding to this...
thank you
it certainly helped me focus and appreciate your piece more !
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Oooh I like [=
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It worked out in my favor.
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