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cutting through time zones


heart pounding
in my throat,
stepping off the plane

each movement
bringing me closer to you,

this is the moment
I've been counting down to
for months.

nothing else matters
now that I'm back in your arms.

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I get to see my Fiance in 11 days after months and months of waiting!!!

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  • AshesFromFire
    October 31

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    YAY FOR YOU! On 2 weeks ago, I saw my fiance for the first time in 133 days! 'm glad you made it back to your lover!
    Short, sweet, siple, to the point, lovely.
    Good luck in my contest