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Mine

Insanity is closing in
It's coming fast It's coming hard
It's taking over
It's taking hold
It's gripping me it's hands so cold
I can feel it holding me
Coddling and soothing me
It's grip is hard
It's grip is fast
It's grip is choking out my breath
It comforts me
It's voice so cruel
Without emotion
Without compassion
And yet I feel so much safer
While it taunts
And while it mocks
It's always there
There for me
Here for me and me alone
It never leaves
Never deserts
It stays here and always hurts
It reminds me
Always reminds me
I'm still alive
If it were to leave
I'd be so lost
Without myself my other half
It's part of me now
Part of me
And me alone

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  • oldschoolhero
    October 30
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