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Feelings off a shy girl

No one cares what i think
No one cares how i feel
I don't have feelings in my skin
They are buried deep within

Say what you want she does not care
Talk all you want she will not feel
She doesn't have feelings in her skin
They are buried deep within

Close your mouth before you speak
Your words are sharp and stab me deep
It may not show but my feelings are raw
buried them deep so no one knows

Closed my mouth long ago
To silence the pain that grows and grows
I have feelings within my skin
Buried them deep as deep can go

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