we must allow this
crackling and popping fuse
to be lit; this firework
explosive and incendiary
this adoration it is
the light in the night
of the moon and celebration
will shine down upon us
we must let it illuminate us
with its incandescent blaze
A contest entry
- EVERYBODY WINS QUICKIE (prompt up, closes tonight) by ZachP.
700 points, ended October 30, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inspire me to write again! :) by Beautiful-N-Broken.
700 points, ended November 2, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a great write. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for entering this write into my contest and giving me the oppurtunity to read it. Keep up the great writing and congrats on your previous HM.
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your imagery is stellar and intense
and very explosive . . . an amazing write
that harmonizes quite well with the prompt, I think.
Well done, and thank you for sharing. -
this is so intense, and, pretty My favorite part was the whole last stanza.. I have a weakness for the moon and stars
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