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Hearts

Minds that meet can surpass the barriers
As if they are not even there
…even though they are
Life travels like the wind
But some choices should be made from a rock
Minds that think in twists and turns
Search for a rock that isn’t there
While hearts drift off to desolate
and pain filled lands
In springs new beginning
Hearts like kites can soar
Once winter’s chill bites through the air
Hearts crash and break
And summer’s calm is but an oft forgotten memory
In this way the seasons pass
Just out of reach as they go

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  • x Simply x Me x
    November 13
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    You wrote this on my birthday(:

    its very beautiful. my mavorite lines:
    "Life travels like the wind
    But some choices should be made from a rock"

    very true.


    • jt4mc
      November 13
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      Happy Birthday!!! (a little late)
      Hope it was a good one!
      & as always... thanks for the comments!!!!