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Beathtaking

A golden leaf falls from a tree
And slides onto my head
I start to laugh
And analze the beautiful colors, within

A flake of snow falls from the sky
Just a few months later
I catch it with my tounge
Gorgeous, but not a delightful flavor

Soon the ice is gone, and spring comes along
Rebirth to the world is here
Go outside
Pick a flower and cheer

School ends quickly
And summers arrived, the take to for a drive
Through the grass, and bright blue sky
The sun raging wild, until dusk that night

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