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Freestyle 10/30/09

half and half blast n crash flash in a dash with a raspy gaspy moan. full blown home grown do i detect a tone of hope?  nope not yet, not ready , not me. sumthin i'll never be, is complete. a feat of strength hercules zodiac sign outta my mind as i intertwine fantasy and reality with daily terminology. complexity of natural selection gots me vexin like a hex from a hag in drag while she drags on a lucy. little white cig mixed with sticky icky green yeah that used to be my scene til the anxiety got the best of me. paranoid android like radiohead it fed into my fears over the years so now i try to steer clear. oh boy whadda you know yep gotta go far from home i roam on different planets and dimensions. i like to keep em guessin what all my rhymes mean. but how? they unknown even to me! anyways have a great day yeah i just typed this in 2 minutes flat while laying on my back after a nice fap fap fap. and it's like that.

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Basic outline of a rhyme composed at the drop of a dime.......nothing but the very basics here. Typed this out in about 2 minutes real quick, so if it's hard to follow, my bad.....just bored at work.

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