a cannonball spinning,
Spinning...
Judgements called
where no one is listening,
the gravel smells
like worms...
The shovel pats down
my new innocence, entering
into a new world
worth living.
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have 10 lines
and 30 minutes
A contest entry
- EVERYBODY WINS QUICKIE (prompt up, closes tonight) by ZachP.
700 points, ended October 30, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites. by Antebellum.
400 points, ended November 14, 201 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What comes to mind...?
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Congratulations on the Bronze Cup!!
Wow. This is a brilliant poem!! I WILL be back to read more of your work, Poet!! Write on... 
Peace & Hugs Always,
Cyn 
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Thanks Will be stopping in soon to read some of yours as well
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The shovel pats down
my new innocence, entering
into a new world
worth living.
I love this ending. fantastic write. thanks for entering.
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this is such a beautiful poem, dear poet.
only through action, through motion
is a worthwhile world made.
thank you for sharing. I wish you the best,
as always.
Zach Estel. -
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surprised with the trophy that is.. lol Not at all of the awesome poetry here
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Oh..! Thank you so much for bronze There were so many great poems here, I was a bit surprised! Great contest!!
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