A cobweb struck in claws
so little dark and sharp,
insects bonfire picnic
all round and round
fluorescent lamp
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lizard spider
-sharp turned soft;
-curled clayey enzymes
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trapped untrapped-
trapper trapped;
"untrapped" a trap
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play-gay-prey
Author notes
Word prompt: Vanished
about a lizard spider and insects-
spider webs to trap insects, lizard come to eat insects but, get claws entangled in spider's web, since, something better than nothing so, muches spider but he remains trapped with his sharp claws meshed up in dense rolled webs, but in the absence of predators insects enjoy, in short its about vanished predators :-)
Hidden meaning: Destiny rules, weakest may win over the mightiest- it so depends on the situations or conditions!
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Comments
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I have a verdict.
I admire your writing style. Very similar to my own, actually.
Good job. -
Wow, my friend..This is new for you..lol.Your imagination is incredible.The imagery in this is astounding, to be sure..Message me and let me know about this poem and your intent..You have me a bit fooled here..I take reviewing seriously, so I would welcome your input..lol Thanks
John
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Yeah its new for me- an experiment, I've added details in author note, please read the story behind the poem that will clarify things and dear thanks for kind words, believe me your words encourage to work hard :-)
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