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Great Fall

I'll admit it
It was my mistake
But it was an accident
But now all I have is a pulsing heartache

After I let you go
I realized how stupid I was
This was my Great Fall
And this is because

You're sweet
You're kind
You're the first to understand me
For each other we were designed

But I grew tired of it
It was boring
We were like twins
But when I let you go my heart started soaring

I want you back
I need you here
I'm missing part of myself
I know that I told you to just disappear

That was my Great Fall
Now I have to make it up to you
And if you say no
Then I guess I know who I have to pursue

I've fallen
But what I had to do next was understood
Putting my hands on the ground I pushed up
On my feet I stood

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