tonight is the night i end it all
all the pain
all the hurt
by this blade accost my wrist
let the blood flow
let my bleed out
with these pills i will be at rest
just let me die
its my only way out
out of this world
out of this place
hand this noose around my neck
stop my breathing
stop my heart
put the gun to my head
cock it, pull it
blow my brains out
end it now
end it to night
i would love to know what you u think,sorry if you dont like it
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not bad at all
I just read your poem. I enjoyed it very much. there are times in everyone's life that we can all relate to this poem. I personally have been there myself many times but somehow I have always managed to pull myself away from that final edge. You write beautifully. I will enjoy reading other poems that you have written. -
awwww..... this is a really nice poems
its so sad i rember i used too be like that...=D
nice poem keep writing
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