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the end of it all

i miss your smile
and its been a while
since i heard your laugh
i never thought it
would ring back in my mind.
and its been so long
since that last kiss
but man it still
lingers on my lips
and it wont go away.
i cant make myself
feel this way
that way always
happy when im
missing you so bad.
so take this away
im tired of wandering around
feeling so lost
ive wandered out of my mind
and i cant get back!
so take this away
im tired of wandering around
feeling so lost
wheres my superman at now...





thats what i thought

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its not the best but its the truth

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  • Chanes Forever
    November 2

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    The truth can still be the best.

    Um...I've been missing out on a whole lot of what's been going on with you, Jackee-lin, but now that I'm back I can see you've worked a lot on writing...And it's REALLY good. Seriously. I'm sorry for whatever happened that did this, but...good luck to you, okay?