Lets play a game called World Peace
it will last for eternity
good and love we release
Kindness is our fraternity
Every body wins in this global game
It is simple and easy and now waiting for you
come and join, link arms, do what you do.
just one favour world, one favour i ask to
bring world peace into this everyday
where everyone has a voice
everyone learns and they listen
every body has a choice
but i know this might not make a difference
this little poem to the world
but it can make a difference to you
and you can make a change to the world
Any Thoughts?
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World Peace sounds like a great game! Your first stanza awed me. I agree with you. Even as the previous commenter points out God's reign in world peace, we all have roles to play. Being a Christian, I tend to interpret "the world" as those not "saved" which leads me to interpret your last two lines as a personally divine command to myself! Wow, keep on writing!
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Cool Poem.
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Great job on this poem. However, only God can and will bring about world peace according to the Bible.
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This is excellent and every poem written abouit peace can make a difference I believe. Everyone has their own way or working towards world peace and if that effort is to write poems or one poem then we are all doing something
Your words are encouraging and inspirational and could make a difference to one person reading it and realising that what you are saying is true
Wonderful Lana
Gaylene
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Thank-you! lovely comment
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I like this! This really encourages anyone who reads this to make a difference. Nice take that world peace is a game that everybody wins. I like the last stanza too, very observative. But this poem did make a difference, because you are the one who wrote it, you observed and wrote it down in words, meaning you tried to help. So if only you share this poem out to others, then I'm sure it would do very well! Great job. =)
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Thank-you
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