You're three pairs of socks (and still being cold)
and you're a warm mug of tea by the fire.
You're chilblains and you're not complaining,
you're bobbles on hats and toggles on coats.
You're dog-bane bangs and ohhhh pretty lights,
and you're hot pumpkin soup in the night.
You're the carving of squashes and the
loosing of scarves and you're mushrooms
and black cats and fog in the morning.
And you're oh so much more, and yet none of these things,
you're Autumn and I love you the best.
Author notes
Teehee.
I just had to quickly write this for something, it didn't need to be good. 
Declaration of Inspiration:
Autumn, obviously. Also 'SizzyFid' gave me the idea of the 'You are.../I am...' thingamy.
What did you think
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looks like you're going to have to warm all that tepid stuff up eh? nice one.
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Ya know, my name's Sizzyfid on this one, not Fizzysid. ;D
BUT I LOVE YOU THANK YOU.
Okay I'm totally gunna pick out just a few lines that I love, because the whole thing is incredible and it's impossible to pick my favourite part;
"and ohhhh pretty lights"
I love thissss. I really like the informality. It sounds totally sexy if you read it out loud.
"And you're oh so much more, and yet none of these things"
You contradicting little... ;D
I love this too. I totally like the way you've played with the concept here. The way it's both there and not, if you get what I mean. Clever clever giiiirl! ;3
Anyway I'm gunna run now, because Will's petting me and it feels DAMN GOOD. ;D
Have fun, and I MISS YOU.
Pretty girl with your pretty poems. ;D
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Thankyou, you fizzling fuzzy bear-girl.
You're comments always make me grin, damnit. :]
I'm sure you enjoyed you're petting session ;3
WHY ARE YOU NEVER AT COLLEGE ANYMORE?
xx I need to talk to you when you get back. x -
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Because I HAVE RUN AWAY FROM HOME.
>=D
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0: Seriously?
(Damn Internet-Talking and it's lack of expression/tone)
Reuben. <3
XX
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