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Haunted

I see you all the time
when I sleep or wake
everywhere I go
your there
haunting me &
taunting me
I want you so bad
but you never knew
just how much
I loved you
I can't seem to
get rid of you
I've tried so
hard not to
think of you
each night
I toss & turn
not being able
to sleep
bcuz everytime
I try
I see you
& I want to cry
my heart is broken
because of you
I want to die
because you never cared

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  • i think im in love
    November 2

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    i love this and can relate. im going through this right now. it has a nice flow and you can feel your pain and the need that you have for this person. this is a good poem. keep writing.

  • Self-Inflicting
    October 31

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    good

    good write, I like this. It is easy to read and I can really tell that you are a compasionate person! I like how yuo reallly get into your poems ! GREAT JOB!