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~Living Inside Myself~

Not meaning to sound,
Like an "emo" statistic.
But this world seems to,
Drive me insanely ballistic.
Of course their are good times,
Lots of feelings of delight.
But a struggle nonetheless,
I express when I write.
Being out there exposed to,
All varieties of pain.
The motivation to continue,
I need to sustain.
Everybody must do,
What's best for oneself.
So this is where you'll find me,
Living inside myself.

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  • Survivingbychance
    October 30

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    Aren't we all living inside ourselves? Very true write, and very good. The truth of the words strikes home for me right now, and this is certainly your own style. The rhyme scheme works well for it and I really like the meaning behind it.

    Thank you for sharing this with those of us here on AP. Great write, friend.


    • fallendust
      October 30
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! I am glad you can relate and enjoyed my write. Thank you very much for reading my work! I will have to check out yours as well!!! Hope you're having a good day hun!
      Sincerely,
      Sarah