I know the thoughts are often the only things bothering me
and so, I let them go...
for a while
my whole being
swells
and lets out such a heavy sigh
of relief
it's not as hard as it seemed to me before
everything is okay, really
the little things that happen...
well, they're more trivial to me now
than they had been
smiling,
I have finally realized my folly
breathing deeply,
watching, wondering at the world around me,
I no longer let the disturbing whispers
disturb me anymore
no longer letting my thoughts tangle with my emotions
permitting a clear mind, the way it should have been
all this time
I let the music, the voices, the sweet sound of the earth breathing
fill my head till there is room for no more
my eyes, the same
taking it all in, not particularly caring, not thinking
wondering, sometimes
but it is so much more shallow
yes?
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YES YES YES. =]
I admire the fact that you can so
easily put your thoughts together to
create something. . . well like this. That
is so incredibly amazing. You have a way
with words, honestly.
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thanks much
i just love how the same feeling i had when i wrote it comes back to me full strength as i read it again
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Kassie! you have no idea how beautiful this is, and what makes it even more precious is that it's coming from you...!
Having followed your poetry and seeing the pain, the angst and confusion, my heart is filled with happines to see you where you need to be...standing in the light...
No one can ever take that away from you!
A beautiful write!
John
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thank you so much John! i did read over my earlier writes and noticed the often jagged transformation of my thoughts. it's nice, having watched my own progress this way i like where i am now
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