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the moon is far too tired now

Love until the moon is tired,
then subside upon the beach;
it's golden colours are uninspired.
Our hands are sleeping, each to  each.

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 7
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    a lovely quatrain that makes me hungry for more


  • glenn shannon silver member
    November 2
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    soft and romantic in few words lovely work


  • penman gold member
    November 2
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    Wonderful

    A terrific write for the theme title. And very descriptive. Best of luck in the contest

  • abu nuwas
    October 30
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    Judith

    Yes! Byron would have approved -(We'll go no more a-roving/By the light of the Moon)