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Miracles Expressed Ottava Rima

My heart grew wings and soared the day you came

reborn, mommy, the moment of your birth

a precious life, gift of God's love, to name

tiny little fingers and toes, such mirth

my past, present and future; yours to claim

little angel from Heaven you're my first

I love you so my little baby girl

you just don't understand you are my world!

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  • longte
    November 19
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    This miracle was well expressed


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    November 18
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    I commented on this when it was entered in my contest and you know how much I related to the sentiments expressed.


  • arafura gold member
    November 14
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    A mother's love is a wonderous thing! You expressed that love clearly.


  • Fug-azi
    November 12
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    That is so sweet, not in sicky way, I remember my first son being born .. you are right they do become your world.


  • Hetha gold member
    November 9

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    I felt the sheer joy and bliss within this piece. Being a mom changes everything.


    ~Hettie

  • Climbing2nothing
    November 3

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    as I am about to be a father, this speaks volumes an tears of joy to me this day, a crystal within this watery universe of such hope an power you just cannot help but smile that knowing smile...

    w a pot of jasmine and a few geraniums
    -Jas

  • mcheadle
    October 30
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    As love bust from my heart

    Love in my arms at last. How precious you are, how close I hold you child of mine...mac


  • morningstar1948 gold member
    October 30

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    This one made me Cry

    This was not only beautiful but so precious and that is what life is all about
    God Childrens he give us to have and when one day they are all grown up and life repeat itself.
    Love
    Mom

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