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Lost and Lonely

I'm sitting by the window
Watching the rain pour down
My mind is going crazy
Everything is a little hazy

I feel so lost and lonely
I don't know what to do
I feel so lost and lonley
I need to be with you

The alarm clock sounds
And I know it's time to go
But I can't move myself
The world is moving so slow

I feel so lost and lonely
I don't know what to do
I feel so lost and lonley
I need to be with you

Why did you leave me
What did I do wrong
I feel so empty
Where do I belong

I feel so lost and lonely
I don't know what to do
I feel so lost and lonley
I need to be with you

I sigh as I leave my room
And leave behind my sorrow
It's the beginning of another day
The start of another tomorrow

I feel so lost and lonely
I don't know what to do
I feel so lost and lonley
I need to be with you

The days go by
All I do is cry
You left and now I'm feeling cold
My limbs shake and I start to shiver
My eyes water and my lips quiver

I feel so lost and lonely
I don't know what to do
I feel so lost and lonley
I need to be with you

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  • Little Blue Bird
    November 4
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    Good job

    I really like how you make the reader feel like Bella. Thank you for entering and good luck.

  • imagine feeling that way everyday of you life, after a while you stop feeling human and think you are just something else, keep it flowing