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Mellow





the pieces fallen are coming back together
like a puzzle
now forming the clouds and sky
breezy, light
irregular and free
dripping colors, swirling around in my eyes
head spinning while a smile finds me





Author notes

8-20-09
i wrote it in the car while my dad and i were taking a drive. the sky was so pretty and i just felt an overwhelming sense of curiosity, confusion, and an infinite mellow melding with my creative mind

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