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The Dream Of My Lost

Lost forever, I cry, as my heart fades.
Her eyes, golden as the dawn, like my air,
I need her to breathe.

So bloom thee roses, shine like tomorrow,
your beautiful petals. And may I dream
of her always.

Author notes

"May her memory stay this dream in my head, till my final breathe."

Sincerely,
D.wolf

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  • Wulfys Broken Wings
    November 3

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    beautiful love it
    it has a certain element to it that can't be explaned in just words
    this is a awsome peice of lititure well written luv it


  • DarkShadowDemon
    October 30
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    wow this is really good