sick sin, sixth sence
sex an styx
can loose affixed crucifix
in sects
Merchantine warshops
warshipping war stops
Argentines worship
endorse ops
Moscows masking
muslims in tasking
as Queen masques
cow as king
Afghanistans
wrath can it stand
Iraq's dilect
elect Deuchlands
Arabian princes
nubian princess
heir to ruby an
incest
Vatican mortars
discordend borders
that it can order
in dischord
Is he real Budah
Ku-da-tah Judah
whose the israels
fued of
pristine chaps in
sistines grapple
insisting maps
in chaple
senior man
monseignor see
mans seen her
monsoon seize
residents can't school
precedence canceled
presidents presence
in council
motherland farther
netherland father
fartherland nether
in fatherland
six an, six an
six an styx
can Lucifixt crucifix
Insects
A contest entry
- 1 year anniversary, Anything Brilliant:) by petalblue2.
1700 points, ended November 9, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is fascinating. The play on words will have me thinking all day.
You set the bar higher for me with each read.
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Wow! I have never read anything like that! I will have to make a point to explore your other works. This was absolutely brilliant with the detail, humor and depth you put into this. Honestly phenomenal
Thanks for entering!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanx for your time and compliment
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How hard was this to write? The rhyme and word play are amazing...Brilliant for sure...readed several times and found it deeper with each. Great work.
mystic
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Phew, all those rhymes and wordplays! This piece made me smile, and yet made me frown. I could feel the emotions and the hurt that this piece hides, and imagine the pictures you drew out with words.
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thanx for your comment
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BRAVO....you my friend have real ability...nicely penned
T
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