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Sun

it's a modern day
with happy girls
and bouncy curls
jumping in the sun.
and i'll never leave
you can tug but
i'll never go away
from this place.


it's just a lovely day.

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  • afzal shauq
    November 2

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    great task

    love this poem..done very professionally...and thanks for appreciate my peace cause and sure you are one of a best companion of mine in the same sacred cause of humanity to project and protect...God bless you


  • Jornada
    October 30
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    Chiffon and steel.

  • i like it simplistically beautiful keep it up!


  • A-Sky-Lark
    October 30
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    ohhh, i love this.
    wish it was sunny here..all we're getting is rain rain rain

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