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He Waits Beyond

 

one step forward

            two steps back

 

the wheel of life

just keeps turning

 

hang tight to the spokes

             time waits for no one

 

uphill, downhill

 

forked road ahead

we choose

              right, wrong

 

the road is long

sometimes dark

 

twinkling stars will brighten

the path of the open door

 

where the sun shines tomorrow

beyond the horizon

 

he waits...

 

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  • The Drifter
    November 2

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    A very well written poem that explains life to a "T". I like the flow, it fits the poem well. "Beyond the horizon, HE waits" is the sum, the total of it all, a new beginning. Thank you for sharing, it is inspirational. We will win.


  • arafura gold member
    October 30
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    Excellent. Beautifully written.


  • Myrtle Thomas
    October 30

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    Wonderful

    Such a great way to look towards the road of life .Some take the wrong way for a time but get on the right road.But then some just dont care they stand to loose the grand finale the great destination.This is so beautifully written I'm sure it will touch most who read it. All I can say is BRAVO