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In the Blink of an Eye

O God!
If you don't think of me
my prayers are but random thoughts
far off in the distance like a wisps of smoke
being blown Your way
slowly coming and slowly disolving
into thin air while yet I pray...
O God!
Think about me
just think...
Trun Your eyes upon me
if only but to blink
and trun them away...





Author notes

It has been said we shall be changed from mortal to immortal in the twinkling of an eye. I believe just one blink of God's eye would bring about that change. Only my thoughts...

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  • Humm...yet you are working...but the work you completed so far is very moving and represents your soul very honestly..well said...thank you so much for entering..


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 30

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    this is so why you are special

    you have this humility that is amazing

    we all need to obtain this quality

     

    this quality is why God does think of you...

    very lovely Judy

    God bless you my friend


  • Endeavor gold member
    October 30

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    Excellent

    Turn Your eyes upon me
    if only to blink
    and turn them away...

    I changed the spelling
    of all people... me

    Love the ending
    all very moving

    Rick

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