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frayed

those days come again

where life is tattered,

ripped apart and stitched back

 

into gilt frames of faces

all too familiar

to a past i am letting go

 

the memories are dead to me,

locked surprisingly into bone

as if spurred on by the broken,

achingly real even in twilight

of the distant recollections

 

but then there is always one,

it's never old; aged yellow 

or even faded

 

one that speaks- still

 

the words we stumbled to reach,

found them, hanging like vines

clinging to each other

and searching for the flowers,

the ones they used to contain

 

in my silence,

pockets of a room,

the view of you

 

silhouetted on a wall

in visible outlines i knew so well

 

i traced the reminders,

lines as fine as fishing wire

intricate details paled like lace

caught in a smile, a glance

or harsh times

 

we viewed the battlements together

crumbling the walls with ardent endeavor,

fighting a good fight you said

when all we wanted was a final collapse

 

into our arms-

the friendly fire

 

and now the citadel is here

beside my bed

 

the color hasn't changed

rather enhanced, or perhaps that is my perception

 

as sunlight hits it in all the glory

of how we spent an autumn

before leaves turned red

 

the elderly couple we met

reminded us how photographs looked

when all that mattered was 

 

love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 20
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    Well how on earth am I supposed to get through the rest of my day now?

    Truly an emotional piece the lingers in memory. That special one that will never fade regardless of circumstance or purpose because it will always be perfect and nothing can touch it.

    My heart hears these words, finds meaning, and brings home truths to call my own. Wonderful writing for this contest. Thank you. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 30

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    Wow..stunningly beautiful. Your work is always amazing but this one went far beyond. Favorite part? ALL of it. Great piece of poetry.


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 30
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    Oh!

  • I thinks you are amazing. Honestly, you write things I wish I would have thought of. I remember once you posting a piece that said you just post your stuff, and hardly ever edit. It amazes me that they turn out this wonderful, when you dont' even work at it. Brilliant lady, you.