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That one person

Without you in my world
What would I do? With all those hours
Spent dreaming that you could be mine
With all those days I never spent with you
But wish I had, all those embraces
You gave someone else, all the love
That never reached you.

But if I didn't have you,
Someone else would surely do?
You're that one-in-a-million
So statistically, there must be
Another 6500 of you out there
Somewhere

And there must be someone else
Out there that makes me feel better
Than you ever have.
If I shook hands with everyone here
I'd find at least a dozen people
I could like, given a week or five

It would take me two years to
Say hi to the country.
Lifetimes to greet the world
Am I so self absorbed to think
That I've met enough to know
That you're the one for me?

But of the billions of choices,
I chose you.
And I hope it makes you happy
To know
That you make me happy so
Be kind
When you say "no"

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  • Blank Pages
    November 14
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    Great write.
    I read it twice just now.
    My favorite part was the ending.
    "Be kind when you say "no""


  • Hata mig
    October 31

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    Omg, that's so sweet and sad at the same time...

    Once again, your ability with words astounds me, great work hon, keep it up.
    Happy Halloween,
    ~Angel


  • Leela
    October 30

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    wonderful write! it reminds me of a momus song, wanting someone but not needing them to want you back, i think it's definitely a victory and a true love to feel that way. nice job and great sentiment. <3

    *Leah


  • Misskaoz
    October 30

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    I enjoyed reading and I especialy enjoyed when you said
    'You're that one-in-a-million
    So statistically, there must be
    Another 6500 of you'.
    I never thought about that before and I really like the use of words here.
    I do have one question in this line
    'Without you in my world
    What would I?'
    should the word 'be' or 'do' be after the word 'I' or did you mean for it to be like that. I was not sure is this was a typo or not so I am asking.
    Overall great read.

    Keep on writing
    and I will keep on reading.


  • AnimalzAreMiraclez
    October 30

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    Awesome!! : P

    This is really amazing
    and i really Love it!
    You are an awesome writier!
    Please keep writing!! : )


  • Coloured Skies
    October 30
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    Whose this for? -Hugsss-

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