she sits, alone, under starless skies.
the same sad look in her eyes
the rain on her windows,
falling with her tears, oh, how her sorrow shows.
waiting for him to come back home,
never quite realizing, he's too far gone.
but she's so lost without him.....
Author notes
3 a.m.
still can't sleep.
too worried about him.
god i miss my tranquilizers.
i want the truth, be harsh. i deserve it.
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Well Done
Well I must say that the analogy is great and the story behind is is lovely and quite entertaining and well written your words are greatly presumed at peak of your time and the poem adds to be a great little poem but the only part wrong with is the opening
she sits, alone, under starless skies.
the same sad look in her eyes
you need to add another line in between there that follows up right with the last one
that is it.
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It was a very lovely writing. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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Vety well written. I love it
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beautiful,wel done
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