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My Plea

Torment and tragedy
The descent of my life
My soul reason of living
Has gone with the light
He's left again, confused
The death of me will
Possibly come very soon
The promise I've made
Will keep me here in my misery
He's left me with friendship-
and condemning memories
There's hope still for love
But the chances have come and gone
Happiness deserts him
The aspect that I promised to give
Promises are broken
My heart and soul melt away
If I could only piece you back together
Build up the hope in you
Sacrifice every part of me
To provide what you need
I would give you everything and anything you need
To see you alive again
To be the man that I remember
Who turned my dreams to reality
But if my prayers cease to become true
I will wait for you
I have loved enough to never love again
So I wish you to keep my heart and make it safe
While I wait for you
I'll be right here waiting for you...

Author notes

The poem I wrote the day after me and my ex broke up. It was the single most painful thing in my entire life and yet 6 months later I love him even more and he feels nothing....love is such a strange thing.

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  • mstklz78
    October 30

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    Amazing

    I think you've almost perfectly covered how it feels to greive someone dead or alive but with amazing words. It's almost as if he will live forever in your words still there to remind you of your love for him. Like a song your poem is relatable and inspiring. I really enjoyed reading it and understanding your sorrow.