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Red light

finding highs and lows in shuffling frequencies
lost in the rise and fall buses changing lanes
puddles ripple with indecision, red lights ruin the flow
with hands I thought should create, run wild like a bank heist escape.

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Writing on the bus is difficult.

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  • DeeCrepit gold member
    October 30
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    Accidental hit, please excuse. I want to finish what I was about to post.
    Terry