survey:
what are in your pockets?
Feelings in a pocket
Pocket of a lonely nomad
His feelings are for sale
Well, he needs to earn a living
Reach in and feel
Feel the colours explode
Facade of a lonely nomad
Truths hidden in his pocket
what are your views/experiences with masturbation?
Masturbation, contemplation, perturbation
A decision made from a mental agitation
A rule of thumb, a stroke of genius
Mastering contentment with a single performance
Pocket
Reach in and take out a feeling
What is it?
Ecstasy
do you think the sky is a link to divinity?
Ah, the divinity of the sky
Vast, empty and yet sublime
Hey, let your imaginations run wild
But, can't link a thought to what isn't real
Pocket
Reach in and take out a feeling
What is it?
Awe... and longing...?
if you were to live in the early societies of history (3500 to 500 B.C.E) where would you want to live and why? for example, mesopotamia, egypt, etc
Space and time means nothing and everything
Lands under the stars are different and the same
A confused man once asked "to be or not to be?"
What if we could all vanish in a disappearing act?
Pocket
Reach in and take out a feeling
What is it?
Resentment filled with deep regret
what do you think about modern marriages?
Love is a feeling that has eluded the masses
The misconception of chasing down a dream
No longer sacred and no longer believable
So they get married to their own responsibilities
Pocket
Reach in and take out a feeling
What is it?
... Sorrow in scepticism
which religion/belief system do you associate with the most?
The travelling eyes of a lonely nomad
Sees more than the mind could comprehend
The only thing he has is his self
The only thing he trusts is his death
Pocket
Reach in and take out a feeling
What is it?
Serenity
why do you think that is?
I am what I am
Who I am and how I am
A lonesome lonely nomad
And a lonelier obscure pocket
Spend an hour or maybe four
Conversations to pass the bore
Conversations, and perhaps something more
Spend an hour, maybe three, maybe four
Just remember though
My thoughts, are my own
But...
My feelings... you can own
A contest entry
- character interview by flight.
400 points, ended November 21, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was pretty good. though parts of it were choppy. i also don't really like the idea of being a lonely nomad, most nomadic people were surrounded by family (which they thought a very important aspect of life).
but again, not bad.
peace to all ~flight -
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oh, never knew that. will keep that in mind. thanks!
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