Blessed are you truly
madonna of the kneeling phase,
who glorifies my senses
leaning forward into praise,
for yesterdays reward
of paradise begun.
Beginning of the ending
a simply perfect one;
waited for too long
only ever one first born.
Pages of tomorrow
lie empty now and torn.
How beautiful you are
how delicate your pains,
bent over your son
dining on his brains.
Author notes
http://www.tattooflash.us/home/skull-lady-ambigragh-360.jpg
Suitably dark I hope
A contest entry
- Tell me...What do you see? - DARK WRITES by redmoonnrizing by redmoonnrizing.
1700 points, ended November 9, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any feedback most welcome
Comments
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The last line made me laugh. I didn't LOVE this but I really LIKED it. The imagery is almost saintly until that ending line
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