I will always need you
I will forever want you.
You've become the air I breathe, the food that feeds my soul
and the water that quences my thrist.
I don't ever want to lose you.
I need you forever and always.
My heart is with you always
Its yours to keep forever.
I can tell you love me
because I feel it everyday,
and I feel it within me.
I will love you forever.
I will need you always.
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awwww thank u baby
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ur welcome. = )
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oopsie!
sorry, my dear....i forgot to give you some clappers and happy faces....haha,lol!
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sweet love and devotion to your loved one is shining very brightly in this piece. it's a lovely written piece. wonderful work. it's important that we tell the people we love how we feel and that the love is constant, pure, and true. especially with the way some people are. you know...the people that love to say 'i love you' to them it means 'i gotta screw you by any means necessary in any way shape or form'. great job! keep on writing, poet. glad to have you on my favorites list.
just one little thing: where you have "quences" i believe you mean "quenches"? -
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thank u for reading, im glad to be on your favorites list. i will keep writing, especially since its keeping me sane. (lol)
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your welcome! i hope you get to read some of my works. maybe i'll even become your favorite ;0)
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Awe I loved this so sweet. However too many times this kind of love doesn't exsist. I wish I knew love like this. Sigh Bravo love this piece
Searra
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Searra, thank you so nuch. I know you will find a love thats better than you imagine. thank u so much for reading.
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