I miss you
I cry
you don't listen
I die
I cut
you cry
I bleed
your love is all I need
you know
but your feelings never show
if you care
then why weren't you there?
If your my friend
my broken heart would mend
Help me I say
but you just walk away
what did you think?
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So great.....I relly have enjoyed reading your work~! Like said below Ive been through thus as well! And you put it into words I never would have been ablle to do..! Great work. I look forward to reading some of your new things!
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very powerful poem so full of emotions and everyone of them ive been though =[ ive seen your pain and I know as well... and also i know the best is writting about this subject keep up the work
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