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Let Go, Be Free

No, don't you dare say that.

You know it's not true.

Tell me your lying!

You know it won't work out,
It never did and never will.

We always end up falling apart...

So I'm walking away,
And never coming back.

But you need to promise,
That you won't chase me,
That you won't try to stop me...

I cannot love you anymore.

It hurts too much.



Please...

Just let me go...


Please...

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Prompt: Please

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  • Roseamongweeds
    October 30, 2009

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    I like this poem alot, thank you for entering, this contest will be difficult to judge!