I looked up at the sky
Her dark clouds ready to weep
Bright streaks of yellow in her hair
So dangerous to the point it just dared you to stare
Her voice boomed and it cracked
Only then did the first drop fall
It hit my nose with a soft patter
Maybe it was raining to me it didn’t matter
Drenched us to the bone
Me and my little tree
I shivered from both excitement and the cold
The sky screamed again
She lit up like a firefly
But soon her words echoed then ceased
The streaks of gold faded with time
Her blue eyes opened up
She was just fine
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I really liked this piece, it is full of imagery and very flowing...
"The sky screamed again
She lit up like a firefly
But soon her words echoed then ceased"
these lines stood out for me, very poetic...
take care
Suza
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good poem me is commenting agian
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hey that is a great poem! i loved it
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Thanks!
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this is really good thanks for entering and good luck!
-Mary-
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