Upon my heart,
scripted with tenderness
I carve passionately
~your name~
Author notes
Word prompt: Memo ..11 words only.
A contest entry
- Quickie! 8 poets...10 minutes...11 words... by islekine.
700 points, ended October 31, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow! great impact. So brief, so powerful. Very loving write.
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excellent~
This took me back to my high school days
When I would carve my boyfriends name with mine..
We dated 3 yrs...he never married......and we still chat every so often
Thanks for the smile and the memory.......may have to call him soon
I have lost his brother's addy...........and can chat while I get it
Congrats on the Honorable Mention
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Nicely done from Storm
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Thank you
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this is beautiful. such emotion is so little words! you did this perfectly and should have been awarded with a better trophy! good job and keep on continuing to write!
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Thank you so much..your kind words mean more to me than any ol' trophy.
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This is so beautiful in its brevity. You did such a nice job with so few words to work with. This poem packs a powerful message, and it takes a lot of talent to say so much in so few words. Nice job! Blessings, Patty
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You are very kind ...thank you for the sweet comment.
Linda
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Nicely penned!
Thanks for entering!
Best wishes always!
and
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Thanks for the HM.
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Short, but strong.
It's passionate. You've really captured the idea, and in just afew lines.
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Thank you..the rules were for only 11 words so it had to be short and sweet lol
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A strong and emotional write. Love the contrast brought in by the softness of tenderness against the sharpness of carving. Nicely done.
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Well hello there stranger..thanks for the comment. I miss ya around here.
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A beautiful poem hun
The gentleness of heart tatoos the name
Good luck and best wishes to you
Julie
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I appreciate the kind comment, thank you.
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Excellent !!!
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Howdy Kiwi and thank you dear one.
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Oh what an amazing and touching write for the prompt. This really mad me sigh Gorgeous. Bwest wishes in the contest
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Aww, thank you Gaylene, you're always so sweet.
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excellent
Beautiful sweetie
Love this...
Best of luck in the contest
I posted a new one too
Hope you drop by
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thanks Susan, I will check yours out as well as soon as my computer stops pms'ing.
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Beautiful what we would etch on our hearts. These words are sweet. Well done. Blessings.
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Thank you Denerica..it's all I could think of lol
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Awww this is so softly done, it's beautiful C
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thank you
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I'll pretend I didn't sneak through your comments and read that your muse sucks tonight
Your sucky muse beats my good muse on any given day.
I love the contrast between the words 'scripted' which sounds so elegant and flowing.. and "carve" which is so filled with passion.
To be able to condense so much feeling into 11 words.. I'm jealous !
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Now Stacy
back up there girly..you can and DO out-write my sh*t and it's me that's jealous. You are too kind my sweet friend..I honestly appreciate your continued encouragement. It was only 11 words but I think I smelled smoke when trying to think of something. I got'er done though..sh*tty or not. 
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Wonderful
Wow now that is a great memo. Best of luck in the contest
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Aww, I appreciate your kind comment. But my muse kinda sucks tonight.
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