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I May Be Your Hero...

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I may be your hero
But you are the one fighting

You say "Keep your chin up, I'm fighting for you"
I keep it up as best I can
As that time inches closer and closer
The wieght gets heavier and heavier

I know it is what you have been dreaming of
Since you were able to walk
I know you also have no choice now
Your life belongs to them

So your angel,
Your hero
Will be right here
Waiting
For you

I've waited my entire life for you
I can survive six or more months
While you are away...
I will keep busy
But you will always be on my mind

My love,
My demoness,
My beautiful
Exotic
Fighter

I shall be right here waiting
Holding my chin up
Until the wieght is to heavy
But waiting, none the less

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  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    October 31

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    Wulf this was a very touching piece. To feel this way about someone is a gift and a pleasure. Great job on the write. Been a long time since I have written anything about the one I love because he hurts. You are a very lucky my dear. For you have her and she has you, you both are lucky to have each other. Great write very touching and very well put together. Thank you for sharing.


  • PANDAmonium
    October 30
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    You spelt weight wrong......... but other wise, this poem is very good ^^


  • Fallen Ninja
    October 29
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    the wieght is equal upon us both.
    I carry half, as well as you do.