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Beautifully Solidified

tossed immortal,
shoved through
particles of ash

humbled by
shards of scarlet
that zippered
across novas

left in random disarray
and scattered
to furthest points

a first kiss forever scored
deeply into secreted
depths of mind

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Freeze Frame

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 30

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    Your words have breathed freeze frame, and taken us on a journey
    to which shatter hearts and memories.
    Deeply written thoughts

    best wishes and thank you for your wonderful entry

    Julie