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Between Waves




laying prone
here
beside you
my naked Soul
finds no guilt
in touching

my sighs and breath
correspond
to your heart and pulse

my hands
delicately trace
impressions
upon your soul
always forming images
and places
              somewhere for you to dance

my Soul weeps
only because
it is just one
dream moment
away from yours

the difference
is merely
the intimacy
or the distance
between waves

Author notes

My Soul guides my dreams

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 11

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    Nice. I do believe that our souls guide us in our dreams.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 9

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    stunning hun love the words the message and you mind well said hugs always Angel♥


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 30

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    To not see your soul

    is to not know yourself

    your true self

    I often wonder why writers feel this urgent need to write

     

    as I read your words

    I KNOW!!!!

     

     

    LOVELY 'SOULFUL' WRITE

     

    So perfectly expressed

     

    God bless you my friend...