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A Simple First

Dreaming of kissing you,
A simple gesture I have yet to do,
Soft, rough and sweet,
I can almost taste you.

How will it be our first kiss,
Across your finger tips
With a soft brush of my lips
Will I get to kiss you as I wish.

Smiling, I see its true
Your feelings for me shine threw
Leaning in, my dreams comes true
I’m so happy to finally kiss you!

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  • Danilove
    November 13

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    AWA!

    This is so cute. I love ow you captured the anticipation. I can almost hear the excitement through your words.


  • ParadoxVictory85
    November 6

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    The excitement mount to the action is well explained in these stanzas, well done.


  • fallendust
    October 29

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    This poem is beautiful. I love how it flows through and just at the end.....you lean in and fireworks go off as the first kiss is landed!!!! OMG the sensational feelings that go along with kissing someone for the very first time. Whew....im getting giddy and hype thinking bout it!!! Awesome write my love!
    Sincerely,
    Sarah

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