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If i die tomorrow...

i want you to know,
every breath i took,
every word i ever said,
it was all for you.

and my life, my pain, my sorrow, my fear,
it was all worth it,
and all of my laughter and smiles were
all because of you.

your voice was my lullaby,
the sparkles in your eyes,
baby, they were the stars in my sky.
you were my wings when i needed to fly.

if i die tomorrow,
just remember,
I lived for you.

Author notes

for someone who never ceases to amaze me.

i want the truth, be harsh. i deserve it.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • horrorfanatic
    October 29

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    Awesome

    I love this.
    and the fact that its short and still has sooo much feeling makes it even better because youre able to express such strong feelings very easily.
    what you have with this person seems like something that you should never let go of, but i think you know that already
    very nice job.
    one of the best ive read in awhile