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Shade

Somewhere in submersed consciousness,
So dark in it's own light,
Among all of the silhouettes,
Is this dilusional sight,
Where a dream is now figmented,
Refractured into reality,
Where none is what you see,
And only half of what you need.

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  • hey this is good i like it.
    xoxo ellie.


    • Karsis
      November 3
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      Heh, thank you.
      It just kinda... came out accidentally.

      • lol i love when i have those kind of accidents.

        • Karsis
          November 3
          Edit | Reply
          There's a lot more to the story,
          But, I'm not easily suprised,
          And I was that this is what came out.

          Now, by the latest thing I wrote, not so much suprised.
          It is a release.
          This was just... truth.

          Odd.

  • That's hot, and short is sometimes good.

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