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Individuality

Identity is what completes a person
Name is what he calls his own.
Diversity is a denomination
Inherent to all of God's creations.
Vain are men who place too much
Importance on their names
Disposition must not be based on such.
Uniformity will only fit the fools
Analogy won't make self-evaluations cool.
Likeness may attract a new acquaintance
Imitation may even gain acceptance
Though in reality, if indeed truth be told
Your uniqueness is what allures the world.

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  • MassMan
    November 17
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    Excellent Piece

    This is such a philosphical piece of rationale and reason--it does not need the acrostic to give it further emphasis. In fact the acrostic is submerged and seemingly obliterated by the confident message given, and yet--it is there!

    You did a marvelous job on this one, and I commend you for it.


  • TormentedPhantom gold member
    November 6

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    What a strong and brilliant ending. Thank goodness we are NOT all the same. How dull of a place would that be. You make some great points here. Well done!


  • ToXiC-AnGeL gold member
    November 3

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    Fantastic Write Here
    I used Individuality too
    This is Better


    Thanks for Sharing
    Good Luck in the Contest!

  • Bravo!

    Acrostics are among my fav form to write & I find that many can't do the form justice, but you aced this with flying colors! This has great content, flow & choice of words. This is quite a scholarly write indeed & I give you kudos for it! All the best in the contest. IMHO this deserves Gold.