Identity is what completes a person
Name is what he calls his own.
Diversity is a denomination
Inherent to all of God's creations.
Vain are men who place too much
Importance on their names
Disposition must not be based on such.
Uniformity will only fit the fools
Analogy won't make self-evaluations cool.
Likeness may attract a new acquaintance
Imitation may even gain acceptance
Though in reality, if indeed truth be told
Your uniqueness is what allures the world.
Author notes
D R A Y D I S A S T E R
A contest entry
- Restricted Contest for UNCONDITIONAL ACCEPTANCE group members ONLY by MassMan.
1200 points, ended November 17, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent Piece
This is such a philosphical piece of rationale and reason--it does not need the acrostic to give it further emphasis. In fact the acrostic is submerged and seemingly obliterated by the confident message given, and yet--it is there!
You did a marvelous job on this one, and I commend you for it.

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What a strong and brilliant ending. Thank goodness we are NOT all the same. How dull of a place would that be. You make some great points here. Well done!


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Fantastic Write Here
I used Individuality too
This is Better

Thanks for Sharing
Good Luck in the Contest!

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Bravo!
Acrostics are among my fav form to write & I find that many can't do the form justice, but you aced this with flying colors!
This has great content, flow & choice of words.
This is quite a scholarly write indeed & I give you kudos for it!
All the best in the contest. IMHO this deserves Gold.







