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Death, She Comes Soon

She is of a delicate diamond
so intensely gorgeous
and brittle
lined and flowing
with flaming crimson gold
as that threadbare heart races
to keep time
with the panic

digging through her head
and her half-opened eyes
endeavor to connect
unfamiliar shapes
in an idle effort to anchor her filthy soul
to the flesh that defies her

The puddle of gleaming liquid life
in which she lies
serves only to accent her pulcritude
as it escapes its captor,
with a fury so deliciously
tantalizing,
and celebrates with the soil
whilst candlelight dances
upon its aspect

She yearns for you, my friend
She can feel your breath on her neck
She can feel your kiss rushing and enflaming
her core
and its endless web of veins

Death, she comes soon my love
Be patient

Author notes

Death, it comes soon my love. Demons play dressed in candlelight. Scarlet rain on skin as snow- never fades. Come my love and take the Devil's kiss. My lust drenched in blood, my love split the skin. Mortal dreams, thousands years - through these eyes I have held you all. Shadow tears, when roses fade- you will stay eternal Winter. Angels cry- Father doesn't hear...

*AFTER DARK - SERAPHIM SHOCK



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  • Catacomb
    November 2, 2009

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    Great job with the prompt. Take note: intensly- intensely, 'it's captor' and 'it's aspect' both without an apostrophe. Its, not it is. 'Your breathe' - your breath. Delisiously- deliciously. And then viens? Did you mean webs of veins or vines perhaps? Other than that, great job. Thank you for entering .


  • Catacomb
    November 1, 2009
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    Death, it comes soon my love. Demons play dressed in candlelight. Scarlet rain on skin as snow- never fades. Come my love and take the Devil's kiss. My lust drenched in blood, my love split the skin. Mortal dreams, thousands years - through these eyes I have held you all. Shadow tears, when roses fade- you will stay eternal Winter. Angels cry- Father doesn't hear...

    *AFTER DARK - SERAPHIM SHOCK