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when it is nearly lost...

Detention, relentless revocation,
Holding back the realism,
To be one day, set free.

Embarkation, of journeys new,
Taking unseen steps,
To be one day, set free.

Annihilation, mind stripped,
Unlocked inhibitions,
To be one day, set free.

Warped visions of closed eyes,
Churning the heart deep,
To be one day, set free.

 

Only to be left without....

 

anything ...

Author notes

Brought on by the fear of those reaching out dreams/nightmares. You know the ones, were a hand is outstretched.. just don't grab it,,,turn and walk away,,,, fight the need to take hold..

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  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    November 2

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    very nicely written. I could see the picture this pained as always. You have done the most wonderful of al ljobs on this piece. I wish I could write like this but my writes are dark and that is what I do. Thank you for sharing.


  • Pain in her eyes
    October 30
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    goood

    Nd nice to meet you


  • Sunshine Always
    October 30

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    Your words reach out mike and touch those hearts feeling the same way.. Bless you...mal...


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 30

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    pulls the tears from the heart my love...i to fear those reaching out dreams for a loss or even death is always there...turning and walking away is a truly hard thing to do...cuddles close to na hetane to feel his arms around me